jueves, 12 de noviembre de 2015
A Day in My Life
Every day I wake up at 6:00 am, then my my mom always ask me;"Marina what do you want for breakfast"? and I tell her;" mom, I want hot cakes and orange juice please". At 7:00 am I wash my teeth and comb my hair. At 7:25 I go to school and everyday is very confused for me because we have different classes for the first period so sometimes I went to computer class when I have composition. Then to 7:45 to 2:35 are the longest hours in my life because everyday I went to 8 classes and most of my classes are very bored. I only like Thursdays and Fridays because on Thursday we have short schedule and also in Fridays most of the time is short schedule and finally is the last day of school. After 2:35 I went to my house, I eat with my family then I sleep 1 hour and at 5:15pm I go to the gym until 7:00 pm, finally I go to my house again I do homework, watch my favorite program and at 11:30 I go to sleep to be ready for next day. :)
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Marina- Don't forget that when you use dialogue you need to start a new paragraph anytime that a new person speaks and that puncation goes INSIDE the quotation marks.
ResponderBorrarI'm so sorry that you feel this way about school, but I think it could make for a great message. Even though you often feel frustrated because of school, you understand that sometimes in life you just have to do things that you do want to do and I think that could maybe be the message for this piece. Also, it would help if you were a little more descriptive. I know that I would like to hear more about your favorite program or what you do in school that makes it so boring. With these simple adjustments you could make your post that much better! :)